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  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Killing for Love

    Great piece- the voice is really strong, and the situation is unfolded very well. I would think about making the main character more human- stress his loving side, how he ...

    Sep 27, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Not-So-Grand-Central-Station

    Just a story... Thanks for reading. :) There I sat in Not-So-Grand-Central-Station, waiting, just waiting for a tap on a shoulder or a smile from across crowds and an awkward ...

    Sep 27, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Mother's Day Poem

    You don't even want to know how awful I was at writing in the sixth grade. It was disastrous. And this is super duper adorable. :D Love the little rhyming ...

    Sep 27, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Bombshell

    Beautiful piece- the only thing that really irked me was the line, "An example would be". It reminded me too much of writing essays when I was little, and being ...

    Sep 27, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Women of the Forest

    These are really great- you have a nice style... just enough lines to hint, but not to over exaggerate. And I adore your shading. :) Great proportions, great detail- I'm ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Other Re: Dear Humans,

    Hi there- great concept! :) I would consider running this through spellcheck, first of all. I would also consider changing//fixing up the tone a bit. It seems almost flippant towards ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • General Articles Re: Let's See How Far We've Come

    I can totally relate to this- I'm not quite as far as you... I'm still just a Senior in high school. But, even just thinking about the future can make ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Pawn

    Lovely piece- not sure if I fully understand the meaning behind it, but the writing itself is wonderfully done. Love the subtle rhymes and the structure. For some reason, I ...

    Sep 25, 2010
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: It's The Muggle Way, Dumbledore

    I hate fanfiction with a burning, fiery rage. It is the one thing I don't enjoy writing or reading. And so, I've decided that I will not deem this fanfiction, ...

    Sep 25, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: pinetree

    I really like this one, personally. There's a great balance, and while the set-up seems natural, it also seems perfectly organized (in the strange way that nature manages to do ...

    Sep 25, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello, hello~

    Hi there :D Umm, I'm just gonna start off with that picture made me crack up. :) Anywho- yay for Harry Potter fans!! And zombie-writing people. I've always had a ...

    Sep 25, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: New kid :D

    Hi Rhani, I'm Coral. :) So, Australia, huh? That's pretty awesome- I have some family who live there, and a bunch of friends from New Zealand. I've always wanted to ...

    Sep 25, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Some More Doodles

    done during class.. please don't judge too harshly. I'm still recovering from not-drawing-for-too-long-itus. Thanks. So, once actually uploading it on the computer, I realize how weird her legs look,

    Sep 25, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Fifteen Years

    I think this could be a short story- people are often too critical about defining what they are and aren't. Overall, this was written very well- not my favorite thing ...

    Sep 25, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: A Tree and a Rock, don't I sound in-ter-esting?

    Love your style in drawing- and the picture itself is great. As is the description. :) Anyways- very balanced, very detailed, but the separation between the branch and the trunk ...

    Sep 25, 2010


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