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Re: Killing for Love
Great piece- the voice is really strong, and the situation is unfolded very well. I would think about making the main character more human- stress his loving side, how he ...
Sep 27, 2010 -
Re: Not-So-Grand-Central-Station
Just a story... Thanks for reading. :) There I sat in Not-So-Grand-Central-Station, waiting, just waiting for a tap on a shoulder or a smile from across crowds and an awkward ...
Sep 27, 2010 -
Re: Mother's Day Poem
You don't even want to know how awful I was at writing in the sixth grade. It was disastrous. And this is super duper adorable. :D Love the little rhyming ...
Sep 27, 2010 -
Re: Bombshell
Beautiful piece- the only thing that really irked me was the line, "An example would be". It reminded me too much of writing essays when I was little, and being ...
Sep 27, 2010 -
Re: Women of the Forest
These are really great- you have a nice style... just enough lines to hint, but not to over exaggerate. And I adore your shading. :) Great proportions, great detail- I'm ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Dear Humans,
Hi there- great concept! :) I would consider running this through spellcheck, first of all. I would also consider changing//fixing up the tone a bit. It seems almost flippant towards ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Let's See How Far We've Come
I can totally relate to this- I'm not quite as far as you... I'm still just a Senior in high school. But, even just thinking about the future can make ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Pawn
Lovely piece- not sure if I fully understand the meaning behind it, but the writing itself is wonderfully done. Love the subtle rhymes and the structure. For some reason, I ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: It's The Muggle Way, Dumbledore
I hate fanfiction with a burning, fiery rage. It is the one thing I don't enjoy writing or reading. And so, I've decided that I will not deem this fanfiction, ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: pinetree
I really like this one, personally. There's a great balance, and while the set-up seems natural, it also seems perfectly organized (in the strange way that nature manages to do ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: Hello, hello~
Hi there :D Umm, I'm just gonna start off with that picture made me crack up. :) Anywho- yay for Harry Potter fans!! And zombie-writing people. I've always had a ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: New kid :D
Hi Rhani, I'm Coral. :) So, Australia, huh? That's pretty awesome- I have some family who live there, and a bunch of friends from New Zealand. I've always wanted to ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: Some More Doodles
done during class.. please don't judge too harshly. I'm still recovering from not-drawing-for-too-long-itus. Thanks. So, once actually uploading it on the computer, I realize how weird her legs look,
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: Fifteen Years
I think this could be a short story- people are often too critical about defining what they are and aren't. Overall, this was written very well- not my favorite thing ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: A Tree and a Rock, don't I sound in-ter-esting?
Love your style in drawing- and the picture itself is great. As is the description. :) Anyways- very balanced, very detailed, but the separation between the branch and the trunk ...
Sep 25, 2010
