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I think that could be cool :) Maybe, when you post it or whatever, you could ask people not to change their things, that it would be more of a ...

Okay- sorry in advance. This is going to be being hypocritical, as I just recently mentioned useless reviews. But, I have absolutely nothing critical to say about this. This actually ...

Africa was in her eyes, sang chants of home in her heart, even though the days of deserts and dusts had been gone from her feet for years and more. ...

As usual, I'm about to give you the most useless review ever. I hope you don't mind too much. So- beautiful descriptions once again. I love the simplicity of the ...

Beautiful images, though some of the phrasing doesn't make sense- you start the poem using it as one long sentence, as I've seen in haiku often times before. But then, ...

Okay- to be blunt. I'm going to confuse you. I have pretty much the opposite to say of your previous review. I loved the first stanza- it was undoubtedly my ...

I would take another look at this grammatically, and fix up the mistakes and whatnot. Also, I know that this was a real event for you, but it's also some ...

Nice piece- love the rhythm. Only part I had a question about what "wombded". Was that supposed to be "wounded"? Other than that, very nicely done. Love the unique beat ...

These were both great- you're wonderful at blending shades, especially in the girl's face. I would try incorporating more depth in your shading though, as it is somewhat monochromatic at ...

Holy cow.... I didn't know you were so amazing at drawing! :o Excellent works- I absolutely love your use of colors. There were some parts (the tiger's mouth, and the ...

Inspired by a Tom Waits' song, though I can't remember which one. I can't decide if I like the last line or not. Thoughts? Thanks for reading! c: There’s an ...

This was a great portrait, but an absolutely superb poem. I was reading it and thinking, "Aw, why can't I write something like this?" And in every line, I found ...

Beautiful pieces-- it's a bummer we can't see the detail. :/ Maybe take the pictures under some better lighting so the focus will work all the way? And resize them? ...

Hi there Natasha! :) I'm Coral-- I hope you like YWS. It's a pretty cool site, and is really helpful. What type of stuff do you like to write? Poetry, ...

Really interesting concept- I like it. I would stress some points, make it more dramatic with some description- what does the coffin feel like? Physically and metaphorically? What does their ...