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Personally, I really liked this. The metaphor of "dead fish" kind of bothered me, because it didn't connect very well, but otherwise, I loved it. I don't think there needs ...

Where the Red Fern Grows, but only because it made me cry so hard. :)

So, I like this story first off- nicely done. :) There were a couple of plot things that kind of irked me though: 1- why was Gabriel assigned to only ...

Hi there :) So, I think that perhaps this is, as mentioned above, a tongue twister of sorts, or a phrase that sounds interesting, and may be an interesting thought ...

Just some personal favorites.. not all of them, but some of my more recent ones. 1. Down the Tram Line 2. The Glare 3. Unknown Animal- I love these, and ...

Autumn, is that you, killing all the leaves, turning them a deep dark red, the color of tree blood cried through each vein and pore? Is that you, throwing wind ...

Okay: So I'm going to go through my reactions before actually reviewing this. First thirty seconds of reading: What the fuck? Minute and a Half: Ohhhhkay. That makes sense. Cool ...

Wonderful piece- very simple, but concise and powerfully stated. I really don't have anything bad to say about this. Pretty useless review altogether. BUT, very nicely done. Personally, I think ...

I LOVE this poem! :D Super original, creative, and adorable... wonderfully done. What a cute poem. c: Reminds me a lot of something by Shel Silverstein in its quirkiness and ...

Memories of Italy.... sorry for flooding the forums. Sick at home and writing altogether too much. :) We collected glass bottles of sunshine and seawater- Roman sunshine and seawater- and ...

These are quite nice- the ones with birds, ladybugs, and shells were definitely my favorite. I would consider working on your framing and focus, and perhaps running some of these ...

Overall- these were nice photos. :) I would recommend making the angles and zoom a bit more personal though. You have a lot of pictures that are pulled back, and ...

Welcome to the site! :) And believe me, YWS can become quite addicting. It sneaks up on you. :) So, I'm Coral. I'm not driving yet either, and I'm 17. ...

I would try to add in some more "showing" rather than "telling". These are some lines that I think could be rephrased to offer more imagery or interest for the ...

Disease danced in and out of her gaping pores, warned everyone around her that sick was coming with mouthbreathing and nose blowing with a box of thin depleting tissues in ...