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Overall, I think that you have an interesting plot here. But, it gets a bit confusing. I like the tension towards the beginning, the action, the sense of "What in ...

Bit belated, considering how freakin' cold it is already. But, here it is. ------------------------- Summer’s gone , and the birds’ sweet calls have been replaced with the chirping of rain ...

First thing I've written for a couple of days- really short and snappy. Minute and a half kind of write. Thanks for reading! :) ---------------------- She’s a lighthouse, waiting for ...

I must say, I'm American, and pretty much all I have to say in response is "Agreed." -Coral- P.S. Football (American soccer) is 10x better than American football.

I think that these are good- perhaps try to make the colors more vivid to really bring the pictures alive? I would also try to watch how clear the focus ...

Okay :) Thanks!

Why don't photography/art topics show up on Recent Posts, and why can't they be Featured? Is it just because it's a writing centered site? Thanks. c: -Coral-

1. Pelican Pose This is actually a panorama of three photos. You unfortunately cannot really see the detail when it's this small, but... And yes, I know that the stuff ...

I remember stumbling upon my little sister one time, who was twirling and whirling around the backyard, eyes closed and mouth smiling, arms awkwardly held up. I was confused as ...

Hi there :) So, nice piece. I would try to perhaps make the language more natural; as parts it seemed almost inhuman, something that we wouldn't think to ourselves. For ...

I think that perhaps the beginning and end could be worked on a bit more. The beginning sounds almost like stage directions in a play- like you're setting the scene ...

Powerful story- I would try to perhaps add more punctuation or split this up to make it a bit easier on the eyes. It wasn't so much the font type ...

I think that this could be a nice start to a story- however, there are a couple of things that I would try to fix and keep with you as ...

Inspired by a Regina Spektor song. c: Birds sitting on a wire watched you walk away, beaks sharp and pointed though not as cruelly edged as the sneer you just ...

Yeah- I love this. :) If I had this, it would become my morning-cup-of-coffee-to-wake-the-dead-up-cup. It's a STYLE- if you're ever not pleased with the outcome of your work in art, ...