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So, these definitely aren't some of my favorites that I've taken, but they're kind of experimental. :) 1. Experiments with Bokeh 2. Lighting and Droplets 3. Airbubbles You really can't ...

Super cute :) I'd think about changing their expressions sometimes, and being more consistent with the lighting, but otherwise, this was super cute. :) Great job! I've always wanted to ...

Yes- the title is intended to be repetitive. :) So, this is a description I wrote, just to seem realistic and improve my character development and I'm not sure if ...

Hi there! :) Horse-riding is pretty awesome... I only did it a couple of times when I was little, but was ecstatic and awful at it. :D With your writing ...

Your poetry insecurities aren't well founded. :) Really nice piece- I love the emotion and absolute humanity behind your words- though I have to agree: the last line kind of ...

Hi! I'm Coral. :) Welcome to the site :) Glad to see that you're excited about sharing your work- it's great fun. c: If you have any questions or are ...

This was a beautiful piece- I just want to start off with that. But the tones and imagery from the two top and bottom halves seemed very different to me- ...

I think this is good- I'm interested to see what direction you take it in though. This could turn out to be really cliche or really original depending on where ...

This is a comparison of two pieces from the same base. One (the first one) is a rewrite that I'm unsure of. Thoughts? Rewrite: Graffiti stamped walls sent love letters ...

It’s like that moment when your entire body is cramped up, and you stretch, muscle by muscle by muscle, back arching like a languid cat. Or when the plane descends ...

This is wonderful! Definitely a great likeness, and the shading is simply superb. I love the gentleness of your lines, and how it all just kind of blends together. Very ...

So this is actually kind of a personal memory- something I VERY rarely write. But here it is- I dunno if it fully makes sense to other people though. Well ...

Nice story- I miss having a dog. I would elaborate more on the dog than the carride- you made the focus of the story a bit ambiguous, but because of ...

Wonderful- very simple, but nicely unfolded for the reader. Very sweet story altogether. I would try to make the end match the rest in originality- I didn't find it up ...

**SCHOOL ASSIGNMENT** So this is a school prompt, and it's somewhat urgent, as I'm turning it in tomorrow. It has to be a story with animals, has to include aphorisms, ...