Button

Hi there Pink :) I've actually avoided posted something on here for a while, due to guilt, you giving reviews so nicely and all. :) BUT, I'm in dire need ...

So, first of all: there are a lot of spelling/grammatical errors and/or typos. Second of all: I would try to do more "showing" than "telling", and perhaps work on making ...

Honestly, this looks pretty professional. You've really made them pop, both with contrast and colors without overdoing it in anyway. The poses are nice, and the backdrop isn't distracting at ...

For originality, a great deal of opportunities come from how you use your voice. You need to create a distinct style in your writing, so it doesn't sound like everyone ...

Africa was in her eyes sang chants of home in her heart, even though the days of deserts and dusts had been gone from her feet for many cracked summers. ...

I HAVE A KID?! Kidding. Totally kidding. :P Anywho- I thought this was good. You have a great meter and a great story; however, I felt like you phrased things ...

Awesome piece, though it's technically senry, as it doesn't deal with season. I still loved it though. c: -Coral-

Please see The cold woke my lukewarm body, set my heart pounding fighting to heat the blood rushing to my skin; the word goosebumps always made me laugh. I couldn’t ...

Wonderful DOF in this one! :D I really like the colors, though I feel like if you were to change the contrast just a liiiiittle bit up, it would really ...

I really like this- you have great tones and a wonderful mood. The only thing that bothers me is the too-subtle DOF. I feel like it's all in focus, and ...

Hi Lindsey :) I'm Coral... weird name. I know. You can call me that or Persephoneia or Perse, or pretty much whatever floats your boat. How long have you been ...

She was a beauty, a majestic creature who was vain and proud. She knew not her place in the world, but created it. She allowed none to define her. A ...

Hi there, I'm Coral, or Perse, or whatever :) This is a pretty good site- glad to see that people are recommending it. :) If you ever need help with ...

Again, these are fantastic. I love the colors, and your use of DOF. Very nicely done. Also, I just love sparrows, so that helps. :) Do you have a flickr ...

These are really wonderful shots. And I don't say that often. Overall, I think that maybe you could play with the contrast and/or colors a bit, to make them really ...