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I think that the voice and the delayed despair could be a bit stronger, but overall, this was a really nice piece. I love the concept, and the execution was ...

Okay; I'm not gonna lie. I think I missed something in this poem. I'm terrible at finding deeper meanings in stuff. >.< However, having said that, I still thoroughly enjoyed ...

I'd reallllly appreciate a review on this if you have any time. :) However, if things are a bit busy cause of NaNo, I completely understand. Thanks SO much!!! I ...

Nice piece; I can relate in a whole lot of ways. I would try to introduce the character to the emotion a bit more though. Really show your anguish; if ...

Hi there :) So, I thought this was a nice piece; you expressed the emotion with great clarity and vividness. However, the repetition just didn't work for me. In a ...

wriggling ropes of ink in my veins tying me ever so carefully (why’d I write a sailor?) to the words; they severed all other ties, magnificent blades of blackened twine, ...

I ADORE the first one. Partly because I love sheep. But it's just a great photo too. :) Very nice detail, and nice colors. I also really like the little ...

I really liked this personally- especially the end. I think that it could be changed in a couple of different ways, maybe varying the beginnings of each line a bit ...

Still quite rough. Waiting to become objective. :) Remember when you taught me how to play the piano? We taped all the notes on the keys, otherwise, my fingers would ...

So, my review is going to be even more useless. Sorry in advance. But I really did like this piece; it has super interesting and original imagery, which can be ...

So I found this beginning of a book the other day, and kind of like it. The night was full of bruises. Fresh blues and purples of dark, fading greens ...

Very pretty; I think that perhaps the focus would better the quality altogether. They're just a little bit fuzzy. I would also think about trying to define more of a ...

Loved it! I loved the meter, the rhymes, the wonderful voice you've created. And the end was hilarious. It can be difficult to write in the style that you chose ...

The cold woke my lukewarm body, set my heart pounding and my organs quivering; surely by now, my veins were ribbons of frost. My heart had yearned for this, and ...

Hi there- so, London, eh? I loved London! ^_^ I went there earlier this year, and it's my favorite city in Europe so far... wonderful place. I considered going there ...