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Kay, I'm sorry now, cause I'm gonna gush. I loved this piece- it was simple, there wasn't much going on, but it was powerful and very complete. The backstory was ...

Hi there! I'm Coral. :) Welcome to the site! I'm a poem//short story writer too, though I just started a book. Totally out of the norm for me, but it's ...

Wonderful use of emotion; you've really reached a depth that can actually connect with the reader in a powerful way. So great job on that. The rhyming scheme was done ...

I love it! Aside from the originality of the structure, your words themselves held a refreshing genuine-ness to them. I love the personality in it, and the way your own ...

Wonderful piece, but as retro said, there is something more than that needs to be woven into the poem structurally in order to make it an English sonnet: You have ...

That stories sound awesome! I hope you post them on here at some point; I'd definitely be interested in reviewing them :) And don't worry- I think this entire site ...

"Another Alleyway Scene": In which there is a little bit more shuffling, some falling over, and then something altogether unexpected. The man in cloths continued his shambling walk, though his ...

I like this- you unfolded the story very nicely, developed the characters honestly and modestly... I don't really have anything to critique on this. It was interesting, it was simple, ...

Little bit shorter than the last chapter. Chapter Two: in which there's a great deal of unfamiliar streets, misgivings, and alleyways. "Good Intentions?" He had moved more swiftly than what ...

This is wonderful. I just want to start off my gushing with that :) It, for some reason, really reminded me of Murakami's writing style. Which is a very, very, ...

Love it; it's simple and soft, a gentle little musing that everyone can relate to. Very bare-bones imagery, but effective. I would consider playing with your punctuation a bit; the ...

Okay: so something kinda funny at first. I moved, with my mother, three years ago, to the Czech Republic. Right next to Poland. :) Anywho- onto the piece. I think ...

Wrote this in June, discovered it this November, and decided to continue it (on chapter 4 now-they're all pretty short). Working title for the book. The night was full of ...

Written for school-- structured poetry is about as opposite as you can get from my norm, prose poetry. So... experiments! ^_^ "Melting" Sun-kissed icicles blushed and melted to the ground, ...

I do think that these are quite good; the last one stands out especially to me. I would try to make the other two "pop" more or have some "magical" ...