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If you have some free time, would you mind checking out this: ? Thanks- I appreciate it. c: -Coral-

So, I'm going to give a really lame review. Sorry in advance. I really liked this piece- the language was excellent, and the word selection was nice. The imagery was ...

Welcome to the site! I don't think you'll have any problems with the focus on here- it's really writing-oriented, and is a great way of getting support and feedback. That's ...

Experiment I found from a couple weeks ago and decided to finish. Not a religious thingy despite the title. Can you guess what it's about? So I had a ton ...

If you have the time, could you please look at I would appreciate it SOOOOoooo much. :) Thanks! -Coral-

I'm going to come back and do a proper review later. But I just wanted to say that 1) This was awesome. I look forward to more with perhaps a ...

Poem on racism- something I almost never do. You think you can know me through the way that I look? You think you can know my life, see me through ...

Wonderful concept- I think that at parts, it felt a little forced, and the rhythm wasn't too easy to get a hold of, but otherwise, this was nicely done. The ...

I can't decide whether I should scrap this or not. Thoughts? Ode to Freckles: I want to kiss each individual little spot on your smiling face, and would, if you’d ...

We danced round and round the statues, smiling in their never-ending joy; I wished that I could be like them, holding hands and embracing the world, stationary and solid and ...

Please, tear this bits. So, you asked me to teach you how to live. And I have a couple of steps for you. 1) Never ask anyone else how to ...

Hi there... again. Yes. I'm evil. This is my second post on here. Please don't attack me. *cowers* Anywho- if you're bored, or if you have oodles and noodles of ...

The tone in this piece seems to fluctuate quite a bit. I would try to be a bit more consistent with your use of language; each word you use reflects ...

I hate acrostic poems, but this poem is plain awesome. So kudos to you. :D

This is my version of emo poetry. ^_^ Collapsing heart; each valve too drowned in sorrow to continue this arduous beating; there really is no point, not when life feels ...