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Re: The Purple Shirted Annoyance
So, my internet is down. I'm slow on YWS for now. And I wrote this at 3 AM. It probably falls a little flat, but all the more reason to ...
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: Hello
Welcome to the site! :) If you have any questions or anything, please let me know and I'd love to help you out. I too was a writing-hider-person, but everyone ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: going to try to stay open for a bit longer this time.
If you have the time, could you please take a look at this? :) Thanks! -Coral-
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Christmas crash
This was a poignant piece- there were quite a few grammatical errors, but I'm sure that if you went through it again, you would catch it. I would create more ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Rhyming Poems
I too hate rhyming >.< The things that I've found is to rhyme the actual sound of the word, the middle of it, rather than the ending. When you rhyme ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: I Slept Alone
Personally, I have to start with I don't think that everyone poem needs a deep meaning behind it. Not everyone poem needs a story or a narrator... sometimes, it can ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Prologue)
Okay, so believe it or not, this is kind of an experiment of sorts for me. I have never been ambitious enough to quote someone's work, and actually WORK in ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: RAWR!...Ahem. Would You Like A Review? (CLOSED)
GAAAH. I'm a terrible person. This is my third post in here. It's not my fault you give some ridiculously fantastic reviews! Anywho. If you have the time, would you ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?
I was wondering if you could please review EITHER this: (poetry) OR this: (chapter of a new novel I'm working on) I wanted to give you the option because you ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Shaking off dew-drops
Nice job- love the theme! :) 1- I think that the washed out lighting in the top right corner is a bit distracting, and creates a not-so-awesome tone for the ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: I'm addicted to helping others.
I too am an over-helper of other people. However, I didn't understand some of your logic here. Helping other people doesn't end bullying, it isn't an addiction- you can do ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: Kimono Boy
Very nice lines and shading; I would consider differentiating between some lines though. You drew pretty lightly in some places, and so it all kind of blends together and becomes ...
Nov 20, 2010 -
Re: Like Any New Member :)
Hi! Welcome to the site! You've gone SCUBA DIVING? I'm sorry, I know, you said a whole lot of interesting stuff... but I really really really want to go scuba ...
Nov 20, 2010 -
Re: Bouquet of Bruises
Scarlet petals leaked from her skin, dancing between torn pores to the cruel world above, a rose perfume strong enough for the sharks to smell in the ocean that roared ...
Nov 20, 2010 -
Re: Scripture, the largest existing instrument.
Yeah, it's pretty beautiful. :) I'm actually from California, but have lived here for a couple of years. c:
Nov 20, 2010
