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This was pretty much my summer. It sucked. She was broken. It had happened gradually, and most of it was self inflicted. She said she was broken, and so broken ...

IF you have some time, would you mind looking at this, please? :D Thanks so much! :D -Coral-

So, I've decided to be lazy. I'm only reviewing the first person one. :) I'll read both though, and give my opinion on it, of course :) Also, I'm going ...

So, I like this. I think that it could use some work, but it really has some great potential. I'm going to do something I rarely do, and work within ...

Okay, so you have to guess what this poem is about. :) I met you first in a Christmas ornament. It was a peacock, of all non-Christmasy things, a peacock. ...

Hi there- so, I have to agree. This doesn't feel like a full song. Maybe a bridge or something? I would continue with this one and lengthen it out a ...

Really great focus and colors. However (and I don't mean this in a mean way) I think that you could have been more original in the view point. I've seen ...

Goddamn (excuse my Czech), that was freakin' amazing. Teach me how to write, please? Seriously though; you have incredible word choices and language, and the imagery is simply fantastic. Sometimes, ...

Simply stated, but I think it's really effective. The second line feels a little awkwardly phrased to me, and I think that the imagery would sink in a bit more ...

Unfinished project I've recently started work on again. Somewhere along the lines of Coraline. Should I continue? The excitement in her voice was obvious to me, even more so than ...

Okay. I'm sorry now. I'm about to give a super lame review. So, I thought this was excellent. The ending was a little ambiguous, but as a whole, the poem's ...

Definitely not my forte; school assignment. You probably should have read Siddhartha in order to understand it really. Humanity seems to me a broken piece of life, a bad anomaly ...

Love it! Great shading technique, you've made it all very smooth. Not much else to say about it... good job though. :) -Coral-

Nice piece- I love the title and the word choice is very nice. I have to agree about the sing-song rhythm though. The rhyme scheme seems to dominate the poem, ...

Two cliches. :) It's been snowing like crazy. We've probably had about 3+ feet of snow in the past four days. It hadn't snowed at all before that. Madness. Which ...