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Can you remember the day? The day we met, the warm september breeze swarming over the gaggle of students. Swarming is a bit of a weird description for a breeze. ...

IF you have some extra time, would you mind reviewing this, please? Thanks so much! ^_^ -Coral-

Sorry that all happened to you. :/ 7th grade is the time that all that stuff started happening around me. It was crazy times, but it slowly balanced out and ...

So, recently, I've been taking a whole lot of pictures, some of which I actually like. :) 1. Nice Cupp'a Snow: 2. Ahh, the teenage eyes pictures. It was bound ...

You have some great DOF here, and I absolutely love the tones, but the focal point is almost anticlimactic. The nail blends in with the pier too much. If the ...

Dude: that's crazy. And congrats! :)

I liked this- it was original, and it was simple, and it was very well done. (I'm going to do a really short review, if you don't mind too terribly.) ...

So, I used a different type of shading than normal just as an experiment. Now, I know that parts of it are lopsided and the lips look a little weird ...

Welcome to the site! :) I'm Coral. c: YWS is a great place for poetry especially- there are a lot of people here who are pretty awesome at reviewing poetry, ...

I really like this- you have excellent and colorful bokeh in the background, and I love the simple happiness in the angel. I think it's a different take on Christmas ...

That book sounds awesome! I'm a huge fan of 1984 and dystopian novels in general, so definitely sounds like my cup of tea. Thanks for giving us the heads up ...

So far, I really really like this. I think that you know exactly what you're doing, and you're in confident in doing it. There are a couple of things I ...

Okay, I just want to start with I LOVE THIS. You have an excellent command of language, you use repetition perfectly and powerfully, and your imagery is gorgeous and nicely ...

Gold-leaved texts, susurrous dreams that were clamorous and beckoning for recognition; they whispered to me at night, grasped at me with claws and angel fingers, and sang to me with ...

So, I have to agree with retro on a lot of accounts. Ease into the plot a little bit more. It shouldn't be too obvious; maybe hint at it towards ...