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  • Art & Photography Re: My First Art Upload

    Hi there :) Attaching your art may be a bit easier if you use something like photobucket or flickr in the future. So, I like these. At first glance, I ...

    Dec 26, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Fledgling and Liar

    Two separate pieces- they're both tiny. I really like the concept for this one, but I feel like it could be a whole lot better. "Fledgling" Fledgling hopes must take ...

    Dec 26, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: [Insert witty title nobody else has thought of]

    So, I know it is Christmas Eve. (Merry Christmas, by the way!) Please feel free to take weeks on this. Months. Years. Lifetimes. But, once you have the time, and ...

    Dec 25, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: My latest drawings

    GIRRRRRRRR! :D And Spongebob! But mostly GIR! :D Anywho- love these. Nice, simple shading, great little drawings. I DO think the anime girl could use some work like you said, ...

    Dec 25, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Stagnant

    The river pulsed round me carried dreams from my booted feet down to the summer-swim lake, where they grew old and tired in stagnation- erosion dug at my skin, freezing ...

    Dec 24, 2010
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: the sparkly vampire and chosen wizard tales 2

    Hi! It’s not only Hannah Montana who has a double side but Professor Snape too. It was a dull afternoon, Gryffindor and Hufflepuff had a combined Defense against the Dark ...

    Dec 24, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: (unnamed)

    Honestly, I think it's really good. I love the content, the concept... wonderful piece. However, and this is probably going to sound a little weird, the language sounds odd to ...

    Dec 23, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: here i am

    Okay, so first of all, I'm assuming these are lyrics, rather than lyric poetry? mmm...mmm...mhm mmm...mmm...mhm I don't really think you need to write these in- if you're singing it, ...

    Dec 23, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Untitled

    they were forgotten in the rush and anticipation of age, as wrinkles settled into weathered skin, where scars had ripped their place into being- the dreams eroded from my mind ...

    Dec 23, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Beginer in photography

    Hi there :) 1. Nicely shot, but I would work on framing it a bit more nicely- frames are very important, and led a finished quality to a photograph. The ...

    Dec 23, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Quit Work. Become a Trapeze Artist.

    I adore this. I think that maybe you have little too much description in the beginning, and that you could perhaps explain how the whole thing happened, but this was ...

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Exhume

    This was really interesting- I think that I would try to incorporate more of the breathing emotions wise with your figurative language and everything in the fourth stanza- that's where ...

    Dec 22, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: An Unfortunate Sneeze

    So, I just found this from a while ago and TRIED to fix it up a bit. The ending bothers me though. :/ An ill-timed sneeze can really ruin a ...

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Dancing Girl

    I really like this- it has wonderful simplicity, and your language is very colorful and descriptive without being overbearing. However, I liked the first stanza the best. Towards the end, ...

    Dec 20, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: 1940's Pastel (first attempt!)

    Hi there- so I want to start off with structure. The proportions are all very nice, though as another reviewer mentioned, the hairline is extremely blocky and unnatural. That part ...

    Dec 20, 2010


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— John Patrick, The Curious Savage