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All of my words are broken and stained, they’re ticking and tocking like an erratic clock with an obnoxious midnight call- they wake me with their garish sounds and the ...

Hi there.... again. :) I was wondering if you have the time if you could please look at this: I know. I'm quite asky. But you give great reviews, despite ...

I think this was wonderful- probably (no, definitely) my favorite poem from you so far. The first two lines kind of lost me a little bit, but when I read ...

Hi there :) 1. Really nice silhouette- you have some beautiful tones in the background, and the focus is perfect. The only problem is that I can't quite find the ...

I love this- how you punctuated the last bits with "damn" and were so creative in your descriptions and andorbut-ing. Excellent piece altogether. :) Some Nitpicks: The descriptions of the ...

Hey, if you have some free time, could you please take a look at this? Thanks so much, Skins! :D -Coral-

There was an unexpected burst of cold wind from the east that suddenly put a chill in the air. Maybe that ___ a sudden chill in the air? I think ...

Hey Pink! :) If you have some free time, would you mind please taking a look at this? Really appreciate it! Thanks! :) -Coral-

I'm going to come back later and do a proper review, but I just wanted to say that this is super awesome, and you have a ridiculous amount of talent.

This is super duper luper awesome- the hands ARE a bit off, but seeing that this is a cartoon, I think his palm stretching to fit the pen is acceptable. ...

Creep slowly eyes down waiting to eat golden steel. Cracked knuckles and teeth made of wood. All of this is beautiful language and beautiful imagery- but it isn't actually doing ...

Hi there :) So, I was wondering if you could please take a look at this: It's poetry. If you find yourself stretched for time or anything, feel free to ...

Early sunset amoungst there's no "u" in "amongst" purple moors. Metaphorically speaking, what is this supposed to represent? (I'm not challenging, just curious c: ) They catch alight in the ...

her body was a piece of art: bones carved sculptures in her skin and her ribs jutted with claws like angels’ wings. She felt so light that she sometimes thought ...

So, this is my little cousin- we were outside at my grandparents' house, and she kept on pulling these goofy faces at me whenever I got my camera. HOWEVER, I ...