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Re: Love I (Decay)
Dude, you've grown. Your work has always been excellent, but this really blew the rest out of the water. I don't know when the transition from really good to blow ...
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Re: Can they be changed?
I think that if there was a movement in literature, this might be a little easier to accomplish- if it's one person, you'd have to make a big name for ...
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Re: Black Holes
So I wrote this yesterday at like 5am in the morning, after having had 9 hours of sleep in the past five days. Needless to say, I was a little ...
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Re: Dream
This was a really good piece- you might consider putting in some punctuation, so the flow is a little bit smoother, but it's very good as it is now. It ...
Jan 4, 2011 -
Re: *stands up in the crowd*
Hi there :) I'm Coral. I too can take inspiration from just about everything- oftentimes, I'll see a word and think it looks interesting, or I'll write about the emotion ...
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: Born to be a .... reviewer ;) *CLOSED*
Hey there :) I was wondering if you could please take a look at this: I posted it the other day and never got any feedback from anyone, which always ...
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: Renew
Refresh the spirit Renew your soul Nice opening lines- they're catching, but can still open up into a lot of different possibilities. Face your dread Don't fear it Find new ...
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: Clumsy
Fumbling fingers turning sideways in their clumsy confusion- handholding really wasn’t so difficult, but I knew that you were flustered-blustered, red-faced and cute with embarrassed words, stutteri
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: New: Recommended For You
Awesome feature! Great idea :)
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you #2
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Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: Bit's and Bob's. (:
1) I think this shot is excellent, other than the angle. I find it altogether too distracting, and it's quite jarring what a pretty peacefully atmosphered picture. The gradient from ...
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: Allow me to take this oppurtunity...
Hi there! That was quite a welcome page! ^_^ I too am a major reader- I've walked into many a pole while trying to read and walk at the same ...
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: A Questionable Drink (Rated 12+)
Wine-stem fingers, elegant and delicate, cast off their pretenses of the evening and grasped my shoulder with white knuckles and a frenzied intensity. “Roger, you don’t understand.” Her voice wa
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Re: Cynicism, dogs and a good cup of tea
A knife wedged in a wedding cake is a realist view of the world. This is an extremely choppy stanza, and it kind of spells out the rest of the ...
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: You died, tonight.
This is awesome. I read it when you first posted it, looked at the first four lines, heavily sighed, and hit the back button. When I saw it was featured ...
Jan 2, 2011
