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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Love I (Decay)

    Dude, you've grown. Your work has always been excellent, but this really blew the rest out of the water. I don't know when the transition from really good to blow ...

    Jan 4, 2011
  • Writers Corner Re: Can they be changed?

    I think that if there was a movement in literature, this might be a little easier to accomplish- if it's one person, you'd have to make a big name for ...

    Jan 4, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Black Holes

    So I wrote this yesterday at like 5am in the morning, after having had 9 hours of sleep in the past five days. Needless to say, I was a little ...

    Jan 4, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Dream

    This was a really good piece- you might consider putting in some punctuation, so the flow is a little bit smoother, but it's very good as it is now. It ...

    Jan 4, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: *stands up in the crowd*

    Hi there :) I'm Coral. I too can take inspiration from just about everything- oftentimes, I'll see a word and think it looks interesting, or I'll write about the emotion ...

    Jan 3, 2011
  • WRFF Archive Re: Born to be a .... reviewer ;) *CLOSED*

    Hey there :) I was wondering if you could please take a look at this: I posted it the other day and never got any feedback from anyone, which always ...

    Jan 3, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Renew

    Refresh the spirit Renew your soul Nice opening lines- they're catching, but can still open up into a lot of different possibilities. Face your dread Don't fear it Find new ...

    Jan 3, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Clumsy

    Fumbling fingers turning sideways in their clumsy confusion- handholding really wasn’t so difficult, but I knew that you were flustered-blustered, red-faced and cute with embarrassed words, stutteri

    Jan 3, 2011
  • Information Desk Archive Re: New: Recommended For You

    Awesome feature! Great idea :)

    Jan 3, 2011
  • Writing Activities Re: Speedwrite the word above you #2

    Winter

    Jan 2, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Bit's and Bob's. (:

    1) I think this shot is excellent, other than the angle. I find it altogether too distracting, and it's quite jarring what a pretty peacefully atmosphered picture. The gradient from ...

    Jan 2, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Allow me to take this oppurtunity...

    Hi there! That was quite a welcome page! ^_^ I too am a major reader- I've walked into many a pole while trying to read and walk at the same ...

    Jan 2, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A Questionable Drink (Rated 12+)

    Wine-stem fingers, elegant and delicate, cast off their pretenses of the evening and grasped my shoulder with white knuckles and a frenzied intensity. “Roger, you don’t understand.” Her voice wa

    Jan 2, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Cynicism, dogs and a good cup of tea

    A knife wedged in a wedding cake is a realist view of the world. This is an extremely choppy stanza, and it kind of spells out the rest of the ...

    Jan 2, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: You died, tonight.

    This is awesome. I read it when you first posted it, looked at the first four lines, heavily sighed, and hit the back button. When I saw it was featured ...

    Jan 2, 2011


The poetry of the earth is never dead.
— John Keats