Butterfinger

The Beginning “I’m not going! You can’t make me!” Elaine’s protests echoed in the tiny room we were ushered into the day before. My younger sister was attempting to bury ...

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I think you have the right 'passed.' 'Past' is more used as a tense and 'passed' is the action of passing by something. Hope this helps!

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Hey there! Your title caught my attention right off the bat, but when I started to read, it just didn't flow right for me. Don't get me wrong, this is ...

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Hi-ya! For me, this piece was so interesting to read because it's set in a different time. I couldn't stop reading it because you played out the characters just enough ...