Butterfinger

Hey there! Brilliant! Only 'gonna' seems to take away the feel of it to me...it's just a pet peeve of mine.

You always seem to touch down on one firm topic..Love it!

My favorite line: This verbal portrait Brilliant! Keep writing! You've a nack for it!

Once again, simple yet great! My only urk is that 'glass' and 'happiness' don't seem to rhyme very well. Other than that, Great work!

I like this piece! Simple, yet I can feel the emotion. It's interesting in a way that I can't explain. Great work!

Hey there! I like the creativity of this piece, interesting topic! The only urk I have with this is this line: Has been is will be It just doesn't seem ...

Hi-ya! This is for sure interesting! p.s. in your signature, the poem Invictus by Ernest Henley is actually : "....mater of my fate.....captain of my soul"

Wow, I really like this! It's so cool you're basing it off your own art work! Brilliant! My Favorite part: Feel the wind sweep through your hair. Touch the sunshine, ...

Welcome! Can't wait to read your work!

Hi-ya! I'm not good at long reviews but this is interesting! Creepy too!

Very.....interesting :)

Hey there! I could really get into this piece because it was so full of dialogue...not much description.

You like the Hunger Games? They're Awesome! I'd suggest the Leven Thumps Series by Obert Skye.

Great question! Up at the top, there's a tab on the far right that says 'Submit' click that and choose the category you want to post in. Let me know ...

Welcome! Welcome! I can't wait to read your stuff!