Butterfinger

Hi-ya! I'm no good at longer reviews, but it was a bit difficult for me to get into this because there is so much dialogue. The characters don't have to ...

I love the whole idea of this piece. The ghost that has seem all. It just seemed to me that as a reader, I was bored by the forced rhyming ...

Lost my place, gazing in your face. I would suggest breaking this in half on another line. And the deeper I fall the darker my desires Fell to fall in ...

Nonononono NO WAY. You read it wrong. I was admitting that I've done it. Hmmm....After I re-read it, I can sort of seem what you mean...I guess... I can never ...

Hi-ya! Review please? Thanks!

I mean that coming out and being proud that you 'tear people apart' isn't necessarily a good thing. This is an interesting line, but it's like you relish in breaking ...

Welcome! Welcome! I love your lyrics!

Wow! I love this song! It's so realistic and touching! Brilliant!

Ummm....That's not really a good thing. Blunt but I didn't feel anything.

I'm soooo excited for all the wonderful reviews I've gotten so far! Thanks all you guys! I just wish for the number of views I'd have as many reviews!

I'm sitting here dragging in air drumming these keys hammering my brain for inspiration yet the demons escape me the imagery takes flight I'm lost in a world with no ...

I absolutely love this!!! You keep saying you're no good at poetry, yet you spin out writing like this!!! Brilliant!! You're destined to be a great writer!!!!

Hmm....It's still a little confusing to me....oh well :)

Hey there! I usually don't review longer pieces, but this one really hooked me, and I couldn't stop reading! Just like the first person, I'll give it a line by ...

My favorite lines: You build your walls But he came in I can relate to different ways...Brilliant!