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Butterfinger

  • Other Poetry Re: Turn your back

    Hey there! I needed to get this out, tell me what you think. All comments welcome! I've opened the rusty door to my heart Time and time again for you ...

    Jun 10, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Thoughts of a Call-Girl

    I'm not really sure on how I feel about this poem. I like the flow of it, it reads smoothly. But I can't pull it together and get the meaning. ...

    Jun 10, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Experimental photography

    Wow! You're photo's are amazing! Brilliant shots!! I think the first one is the best and it looks great just the way it is!

    Jun 10, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi?

    Welcome! Welcome!!! I can't wait to read your work!!! You'll have a blast!! Bow down to your friend! This site is amazing!

    Jun 9, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello everyone :)

    Welcome!! Welcome!!! Hope you have a blast!

    Jun 8, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Fuzzy Blue Lights

    I love the girl with outlines! It really makes her pop out! Brilliant Job!

    Jun 8, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi, I'm....

    Welcome!!! We were born on the same planet!! I love sweet tarts and green!!! Love being insane! :twisted: Wouldn't want to be any different!! I hope you have tons of ...

    Jun 6, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Confessions

    Bahahahahaha!!! Love this! Enough said! Brilliant!!!

    Jun 4, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Uh.

    Welcome! It's always awesome to have new people here! :twisted:

    Jun 3, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: watching the monitors

    First off: Spelling Error: but failing to return you r fleeing soul to your brain. Next: I'd suggest some punctuation, but don't count on me to help with that :) ...

    Jun 3, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Autumn

    First off, I'd like to say that this poem is written wonderfully for those who like nature scenes. It really is Brilliant! For me though, I guess, I like more ...

    Jun 3, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Freckles

    Wow, I think you did a wonderful job! Very brilliantly wrote!!! The flow is nice and easy and your word choice makes it so simple yet amazing! Great work!

    Jun 3, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: I'm new

    Welcome! Welcome! I can't wait to read them!!! This site is amazing! Tons of different places to go, works to read and fun to have!!! Remember to review others works ...

    Jun 3, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: If Only

    First off, Welcome! Welcome!!! Secondly, I have to say that you're going to get very diverse reviews on here. Some will attack your grammar, others punctuation, others the whole being ...

    Jun 2, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: If it Matters

    Ok, first off, I didn't read the previous comments because it just becomes a reviewers battle field of disagreements. Here's what I thought of your piece: Yes, Rhyming can be ...

    Jun 2, 2011


It suddenly struck me that that tiny pea, pretty and blue, was the Earth. I put up my thumb and shut one eye, and my thumb blotted out the planet Earth. I didn't feel like a giant. I felt very, very small.
— Neil Armstrong