Butterfinger

I love the first part the most....beautiful images that really make you think about them, question them. This is a really good poem even if you think it's kinda rough!

Thanks thisisme! I wasn't really thinking about punctuation when I wrote it, but it could do with some. I guess I was just trying to get the words down and ...

Your poem really hit me because it has personal feelings and experiences behind it to make it more tangible. It seems so real, almost like we're watching it play out ...

Hey to everyone! I'm new, but I have a strong passion for writing in many different styles....here's something to start with, tell me what you think! Let the rain fall ...

This is a great start to a very realistic story that I think most teens these days can relate to....this is definitely a hard problem to deal with, and seeing ...

Wow! This is amazing! I'm new here and your story stuck out to me out of all the others and I can't stop thinking about it, wondering what's next and ...