Butterfinger

I need your honesty opinions.... You lied to my face looked deep in my eyes told me you loved me filled me with lies. You smothered my light Dosed me ...

Haha- I was wondering if anyone would ask about that...Back when Edgar Allen Poe was writing, if someone was supposed dead, they would bury them but tie a string to ...

I have to say that it doesn't take long stanzas and pages of descriptive writing to make a poem. Your poem is perfect in it's simplicity and unique because of ...

Hey there! I love the simplicity of your writing and the beauty that comes from just a few chosen words. There are a few spelling errors, but you've got it ...

This is the kind of poem that hooks me from the start. From the very first line I was curious what would happen next. Poetry isn't always doesn't have the ...

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Wow, I haven't been on here in a while.....but I need to know what you think about this piece....have at it! My body lies under the dirt A corpse, cold ...

Wow...your story kept me racing down the page, hungering for more...it's beautiful in it's own way, and kind of creepy...keep writing!

Please review, and tell me how I can improve this....enjoy! It happened again. I woke up in a hot sweat that drenched my body, plastering my hair to my head. ...

This is really beautiful....I can imagine being there and seeing those sights....I'm not good at reviews, but I really like this one....keep writing!

Please comment and critique..... When I wake, I'll live for you When I sleep, I'll pray for you When I dream, I'll dream of you, always And the day I ...

Tell me what you think.... So much beauty Erupted from a seed Velvet petals of pink So fragile, like china Like the skin of an angel Glowing, angelic The sun ...

Here's a rough story I started, I'm new at the reviewing thing, so feel free to critique all you want..... I knew the moment he walked through the library door, ...

Hey Waterlilygirl! This poem stuck out to me in a couple of different ways....the title struck me from past memories and I had to read what you wrote....I picked these ...

I wrote this one on a dark day, not really knowing what it meant to me...I just let the words flow from my pen onto the page....tell me what you ...