Butterfinger

This one made me giggle to myself, Soon unanchored by physics-intrigued child I always see those stray balloons in the ceilings of stores that little kids have let go of ...

This was enticing to read and it is definitely a great work in progress. First, I have to say that it felt like you focused on the blood for the ...

I loved the rhyme setup but it felt a little forced at the end because you added to the length, but that's just my thoughts. Overall, well done!

I could imagine being on that roof top and I loved how you declared that we shouldn't live like clouds, just going along with every whim of the world, because ...

Don't be nervous! You'll get the hang of it! She drips down like a candle, Hot with thoughts she can't handle. She's with her crayons but she's nobody's box. Interesting ...

It's amazing when you write off a specific topic such as this. There are so many things that a single person dislikes and I found it funny that I hate ...

You did a wonderful job with this! Love how you made it rhyme, but at times it felt like too many words just for the rhyme. There's nothing wrong with ...

I clicked on this poem because I'd never thought about writing about a chair before. Curiosity got the better of me and this was really interesting! I wouldn't have made ...

Wow...this is the kind of poem that puts a burning picture in my head and I have to read it till the end. I love how you repeat Innocence throughout ...

Ahahahahahah! I absolutely love this poem! I have to ask, where did you get your inspiration from???!! Brilliantly wrote and the overall feel of it was enticing! Great job fantabulously ...

Wow, photography is an amazing gift! Those are beautiful sunsets and perfect shots! Great job!

Feet meet feet Interesting phrase....made me smile :) where hearts met pavement. Not sure what your going for, I imagine a bloody heart slatting to the ground...that's just me :) ...

There's so much in just three stanzas and the rhyming made it flow all the better. The feelings are so strong that I can relate to the person. Wonderful! Keep ...

Please feel free to voice your thoughts, spill your rants, I'm open to your Critique! You build me up To tear me down You spread your smile Like a stupid ...

I appreciate your Critique Incognito! I can definitely see your point. I've always thought of poetry as a way to get away from the strict English teacher way of writing ...