Butterfinger

Wow! Before listening to your recording, I really didn't have any great expectations on what it would be like, because you said it wasn't good sound quality. Well, let me ...

I'm not the best critique on lyrics, mostly because I can better review when listening to it. It'd be great if you'd like to post a recording! PM me when ...

I like the idea of this poem, but it was a bit hard to follow, not knowing who was speaking when. I Love these two lines, because when my siblings ...

This one made me chuckle :) My comments are in red Talking to felt so right. Topic after topic into the night. Going on drives, watching a flick, I could ...

I like this. It would be cool to hear it, it sounds like the kind of song I sometimes get stuck in my head. Great Job!

Hahaha :) We all have our moment! You can review by reading and posting on other peoples work what you think about their work and how they can improve. Don't ...

Ok, not sure how I feel about this one, but I need feedback! It doesn't matter what you have to say-say it. Enjoy! A colony of ants march Marching across ...

Ok, not my best, but it's a first try to an ODE. Tell me what you think! It sits there Day after day Waiting to be warmed By a passing ...

I really love this because even when you wonder where the inspiration is, it's still there!

I have to admit I didn't immediately click on this took me a good half hour to give in to my curiosity and it was very good! Great wording! Keep ...

Ok, here's my train of thought while reading this.... (in red :)) You died on me tonight, ON me? not sure if I want to read on, but can't help ...

Laugh at me if you want to Hide from me if you can Let me sink into you Like quick sand Chase me if you believe Stay here if you ...

I love this! You can add to it or you can leave it like this because it holds a striking image with it's two vivid stanzas. This piece paints a ...

This came out when my house was heck-tic and music and yelling rang through the halls...tell my what thou thinkest! Stitches on a striped skin. Layers going all which ways. ...

You did a fantastic job of painting a picture that was both humorous and kind of creepy! There was an edge to it that drew me in and made me ...