Butterfinger

Though I'm not quite sure of the meaning of this poem, I applaud it because of it originality, which detention can sure provoke :). Beautiful wording, it kept a perfect ...

Hello there! This is a great example of a poem that has a great story line and rhyming to it that it flows nicely and keeps the readers interest. I ...

I can't believe you haven't gotten any review yet! How strange! Well, I for one, love this story start! It reminds me of when I would read the Redwall Series ...

I picture in my head Dr. Jekell and Mr. Hyde when I read this!It's almost as if when the narrator states they've married against their will that they've been fused ...

Hey there Everybody! I had an idea and i had to run with it for a while, tell me what you think of this start! Her body lay broken and ...

Well I'm glad to be your first reviewer! It is a bit depressing, but it sounds like in the end there is more hope to be chased after. I love ...

I've been trying out just sitting down at my keyboard and typing away, just to see what comes out. I'd love some critique, good hard, gooey critique!! He sits there ...

This is rough and spur of the moment, but tell me what you think! Green is the edge of grass, shooting up in spring green is the color of my ...

I'm no expert at haiku's, but they made sense to me! I share the same feelings about snow-yuck! The best part about winter is when it's over! Keep writing! -Butterfinger!

Hahahaha! This has a bright Dr. S. feel to it! Beautiful rhyming! Very entertaining, didn't make me at all bored! I hope it won in that competition because it truly ...

I like the base of this poem: socks. A different topic to write on and therefore, all the more difficult! That being said, it felt a bit dry, with out ...

Wow! I love this! It feels like it's looped from beginning to end and connects so solidly! Love it!

Nursing an aluminum Coke can - one quarter full, three fourths empty - I like how you emphasize the amount of coke! replaying the pop of the tab - penetration, ...

Hello there! Wonderful piece that made me put my thinking cap on! I like the idea at the beginning about two figures looking about in the dark. I know the ...

This piece evokes a lot of imagery, that of a person being burned alive, and a sort of satisfaction of the narrator for the others pain. It started out with ...