Butterfinger

What's inside is kept hidden, safe, *Right here would be a good place to add something like: "safe, like the blood in my veins" just an example, but show us ...

Wow, this has simple yet very touching wording. I can feel the emotion because of the simplicity that you put directly onto paper. The only suggestion I would make, would ...

I posted this a while ago, but only got 1 review! Awwww! If you click this, review it! Rip and Critique please! Like a shadow he enters my realm, my ...

I'm hiding in the closet with an angel in my pocket; I shut the door and locked it. Just a feeling, but I can't stop it. I'm wondering what feeling ...

Like most everyone has said, these are similar feelings that almost everyone has had. But we all deal with them differently and the way you express them in words is ...

Bahahaha! You defintley didn't hold back any emotion in this piece! I never took French, but some teachers are just that way. I like how you rhymed your lines and ...

I don’t know how to say this, my words are taffy stuck. Interesting Description! But every touch, and every breath is far too much to Bear with me, hold my ...

Unfortunately, there's no such thing as zombies and Edward Cullen saves the day :) hehe :)

5/10 There's a lot of good description in this sentence, it seems like a lot to swallow at first. Great job! The sound of screaming shook me awake at 3 ...

The dogs are barking Dad is snoring She sucks at parking and Yoga's boring.

Like a shadow he enters my realm, my solitude Darkening my thoughts and purging the light. He whispers harsh, seductive, daring words Pulling me to desperate action. Planting a scene ...

Wow Ty, this really is a beautiful and creative piece of writing. As I'm reading all the comments, there's so many words of my own I'm trying to get out. ...

As I'm typing, I don't really know what to say. I love your writing, it amazes me the passion you have. Your way with words moved me to tears as ...

Can't wait to hear this! Keep writing-you have a talent for it!

Life is full of heart ache with a severed chest a blood trail leading down the hall a closed door hiding a loved one with barred teeth wielding an ax ...