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Re: When the Darkness Comes
Wow, I absolutely love this poem! I've had similar thoughts... relating to suicide...because the darkness came to corrupt and I was open to it at the time. Unlike the ending ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: I will hold onto you
Hiya!! The inspiration keeps coming so I keep writing! Tell me what you think! Vrs1 As I’m looking down From this high set bridge There’s cars rushing by And a ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Because I'm a Christian
Wow, there's already soooo many reviews!! You poem speaks a lot of truth that many people disregard. No matter what your religion, the way people treat you shouldn't be based ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: The Lightning Strikes
Hey there! I really enjoyed your poem! It flows nicely since you broke it up into stanzas! My favorite part: The thunder is A warning, But who Really listens? I ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: You
Hey! This is kind of rough, tell me what you all think! Vrs 1 you never told me that you love me you never asked me for my name but ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: The Eleventh Doctor [pencil]
Wow, that's sooo realistic! It's kind of creepy how he's looking straight out at me! Aw! I really think you captured him perfectly!
May 4, 2011 -
Re: One Shot. Calling All Critiques!!!!!
Thanks for all your comments! I've learned a lot! Where would be the fun if we all got along?! Haha! I'm sorry for being defensive, you've all brought a new ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Therese and Isabelle
It started with my hair, and progressed to a kiss It started with me loving her and ended up like this Interesting how, instead of saying you loved each other, ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Therese and Isabelle
Don't apologize. I was a jerk. I should have listened to my inner reviewer instead of my demon angel. Give me a few mins and I'll give you a professional ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Therese and Isabelle
HIGHWHITESOCKS! I really enjoyed your post. (hoping you're really not just a creepy guy, I'll take your word) I think I just let my personal beliefs get in the way ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: One Shot. Calling All Critiques!!!!!
Tenyo! Thank you for your comments! It's nice to hear what you have to say! I appreciate it! Your questions help when thinking about how to further this. Dramallama: I ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Therese and Isabelle
Wait a minute, you're calling me immature? Wow, that right there is immature. You don't even know me. I was just giving my opinion and you start calling names. You're ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: One Shot. Calling All Critiques!!!!!
Ok, I'm not demanding anyone to do anything. I was simply trying to get some feedback, because otherwise it would just get passed by. I know this piece for sure ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: One Shot. Calling All Critiques!!!!!
Wow, thanks for the comments so far. I don't see how this could make anyone want to set me on fire, but I guess some people just have anger issues. ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Therese and Isabelle
I found this a little disturbing. Actually, a lot. I don't even know why I read it, or am commenting now, but it's just awkward. That's all I have to ...
May 3, 2011