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Re: Baby Birds!
You have to see this! A birds nest in a bush in front of my house! The chicks are growing so fast! Birdies!.JPG
May 5, 2011 -
Re: New and excited!!!
Welcome! Welcome! I look forward to reading your work!
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Same Old Story
This has a lot of emotion and power in the word choice! I ' m tired of being ranged In your claustrophobic cell Love this line! Really it? ain't no ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: What is it?
Hi-ya! I'm here to rip apart and toss away review your poem! First off, it's 'hear' not 'here' Second, I don't mean to be harsh, but I'm not feeling it. ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Shout it to the World.
Love it! It flows nicely, and it's entertaining! I do most my homework too! Hahaha! Keep writing!
May 4, 2011 -
Re: The Loner.
I love this! Full of emotion that carries through to the end. Sad ending, but beautiful! Love it! Keep writing!
May 4, 2011 -
Re: The Loner.
I love this! Full of emotion that carries through to the end. Sad ending, but beautiful! Love it! Keep writing!
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Breath.
Wow! You've painted an eerie scene that caught my attention right from the start! My only comment is you spelled sil e nce wrong. e not a. Great work! Keep ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: For the Being aware
Hi-ya! Here's my comments!: For the Being aware, Nightfall brings about a native truth. Interesting to think about! Dawn shines a blinding light upon the mundane circus of normality, Love ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: For the Being aware
Hi-ya! Here's my comments!: For the Being aware, Nightfall brings about a native truth. Interesting to think about! Dawn shines a blinding light upon the mundane circus of normality, Love ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: When We Were Younger
I love this!It reminds me of the song Back When by Tim Mcgraw! Love it! My favorite part: When being cool, Meant having the 64 pack, Of Crayola Crayons, With ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: It's okay to cry
Hi-ya! I think you have a brilliant start for a great poem! Right now as a reader, I feel like your telling me everything and not letting me see or ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Too late
I'm a little confused by this, but here's my comments! I'm walking through these empty halls filled with memories of you surrounded by a silent darkness Love this! your feelings ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: The Life of a Coat.
I never would have thought so much could be written about a coat. Brilliant!
May 4, 2011 -
Re: I will hold onto you
Hey ScratchMan! Thanks for the review! From my perspective, a bridge would be quicker than I knife, or maybe the character doesn't fancy stabbing them self as much as jumping ...
May 4, 2011