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Re: Bad Memories
Hi-Ya! I personally don't care if the title is spelled wrong. Every work deserves a review regardless if the title is spelled correctly. I really like this one! My favorite ...
May 16, 2011 -
Re: Horse Drawing #2
Hey Everybody! Could you give me some tips on how to improve my drawing skills? Thanks! Hope to hear from you! Horse drawing 2.JPG
May 9, 2011 -
Re: Horse Drawing!
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May 9, 2011 -
Re: Sunset
Hi-ya! This really brought out a new light onto a sunset for me, brilliant writing! My favorite part: And as I watched that sun go down, the world was mine ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Without you
Hi-ya! You always come with something interesting! I like it! Great imagery! I understand the story line, but there was more raw hurt than emotion. I don't know how you'd ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Nothing At All
Wow, this is a long one! It sounds more like lyrics to a song, I like it! Here's my comments: Like “yeah I’m so tough, don’t need nobody " End ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Dark Pharaoh's Warning Poem
This is definitely a different poem. To me, it's more like prose. It doesn't read like poetry to me. Good job!
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Convalescence
I'm really not fan of this piece. The lay out was distracting and after reading it a couple times over, I still have no idea what it's about. Maybe that's ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Dreams Are For You
This is kind of hard to get into because it's a longer piece. For me I got lost because the rhyming felt forced and that took away the whole meaning ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Deaf
Hi-ya! I couldn't really get into this one because it was firing off questions faster than a machine gun. I do like the story line to it, the girl finds ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Red Crisp Sheets
Wow, crazy imagery skills you have. Great work!
May 6, 2011 -
Re: Hypocrite
Hypocrites have ugly teeth With lies well strewn in all they reap And backs bent with tempers flaring Hearts are unworthy, thoughts are daring Hypocrites have spiny hair What do ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Baby Birds!
Hahaha :) Thanks for your 'review'! I'm not looking for anything professional, just wanted to share. It's also fun when they nest in your BBQ Grill.....not so much when someone ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Romeo & Juliet.
As the last person pointed out, this isn't the right place for questions, but it's a great one! My pet peeve is when people want to know everything about a ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Your hug
Hi-ya! I didn't read the previous comments so they don't influence mine. Here's my comments! I see you staring at me Trying to figure out what's wrong I know it's ...
May 5, 2011
