Burntshadow

I really liked this and want to find out more about Zia although I do think it could be improved by more intriguing descriptions for the setting and perhaps the ...

Grr...you stole my idea for a poem (: I thought it would be an interesting theme and you proved me right! The imagery is clear and I like the repetitiveness, ...

Wow I loved this! It's dark and kind of twisted which is great an I adore that first paragraph but I do agree with TGS, it is a little ling ...

I really loved this. It's really exciting and I'm hoping to get more soon! Just remember to proof read you work (ugh I sound like my teacher!) because some doesn't ...

I really like this poem, it's quite effective. I also however don't see the relevance in Einstein quote. I love how cynical it is. I personally like the rhyming as ...