Burma86

I really enjoyed reading this fairytale. Your use of romanticism makes this story colorful and intriguing. As far as grammar goes, what really stood out were your uses of "your" ...

Biotech is definitely a cool field and yeah, I'd never give up writing, even if it only ever remained a hobby. No, I'm not actually from Burma. Haha. The SN ...

I mostly write fantasy.

Loved this, especially "...nothing eats away at the soul more like a slow country song." Truer words have never been spoken.

So they told me it would be a good idea to post here since I'm a noob and all. A little about me: I've been writing since I was nine ...

Excellent story! You definitely put a great deal of time into this and it has certainly paid off. The time-travel twist to the story is perfectly integrated into the plot. ...

I have to say, I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It was fast paced and humorous and you seem to have expertly captured the imagery of a pirate ship and its ...

Borntobeawriter, I really want to thank you for your thorough review. This is the first piece I've submitted and it's one of my shorter and more benign pieces because I'm ...

Brennan ran as fast as he could away from Jackson and the bullies that flanked him like bodyguards. Legs aching, lungs burning, Brennan ran across the lush, well-fed football field. ...

This is definitely a well-constructed scene. The dialogue has a quick enough pace as well as enough descriptive elements to let the reader know a little about each character. There ...

This would make for a great lead to a story. My only real edit is the way you start your sentences. When I was in AP Literature, my teacher stressed ...

Excellent piece! I love the original idea. It's very intriguing. Great length, too.