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Re: Mountainside Magnificence
Thanks for the reviews guys! What I meant by the sun and moon in the sky at once: Here where I live the moon comes up early so you can ...
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Mountainside Magnificence
The upward glance of my eye seemed to deceive me, as the wind caught and cradled my imagination. A magnificent scene unfolded before wondering eyes. The remnant, a fighting beauty ...
Feb 27, 2010 -
Re: To Drown
Hi, Thanks for all the helpful comments!! I didn't really mean that I am really drowning though, but in a way drowning or suffocating in things in the world, problem's, ...
Nov 21, 2008 -
Re: The Eagle
What a wide-spread beauty, Is the eagle up high. With his wings as gold as sun rays, He glides through the midday sky. His wings ripple the air, As shadows ...
Nov 14, 2008 -
Re: Midnight Whisper
Thanks, Maybe I should have left "You listen and see..." out. Now that you say so, It would sound better without it.
Nov 13, 2008 -
Re: Alone
Alone I walk through the deep, dark forest. Alone I cry. Alone I watch the shadows looming, Alone. You don't hear me sigh. Alone my voice echoes with pain. Alone ...
Nov 13, 2008 -
Re: Midnight Whisper
I'm lying in my bed.It's late in the night, Through my blue curtains streams soft starlight. I hear it again.That anonymous sound, It never will cease my soul to astound. ...
Nov 12, 2008 -
Re: To Drown
Hi, Sorry for the HUGE spaces in between, but I copy and pasted it and it didn't quite work!! :?
Nov 11, 2008 -
Re: To Drown
This is the first poem I'm posting, so please correct where you see necessary. To Drown Sometimes life is a sea, deep, dark and black And it grows deeper and ...
Nov 11, 2008 -
Re: Sleep
Hey, I really like it! I especially like the way you make a person feel like they can "escape" with sleep. It's certainly my escape! :) I also like the ...
Nov 11, 2008 -
Re: Those two best friends
Hi, I thought that was really good!! I like the way you you explained how you were closer to them when you were a child than when you became a ...
Nov 11, 2008 -
Re: Among the Lost
I really like the way you described how Jen and Luke's friendship had been and how he felt now that she was gone. Very nice! (By the way, thanks for ...
Nov 11, 2008 -
Re: Just me...
Hi, I'm Sherylee. Umm.. I dunno what to write here really, but I'll just list a few things about myself. 1) I'm known to be a really shy person. (As ...
Nov 11, 2008
