Bugwhisker

Thank you, Stori. I'll keep that in mind for the graphic novel. :)

Any help would suffice. I'm not particular about it.

Thank you for the praise, thestorygirl. :) I can assure you, I'll be posting more before long.

Hi Bugwhisker! I love Warriors, and I'm sure I will love this! Eaglepaw dipped his brown-and-white head, amber eyes glowing in the ever-dimming light of the forest.This part is kinda ...

Who's should be Whose, you know. :) Yes, I know. :wink: Do remember that this was written a year ago. I've improved a lot- when it comes to writing- since ...

Aw, don't take Hookfang, Freyja! I need him for the story! :lol: Thank you for the review. I did notice that I overused the word "small" in this piece. Ha ...

Thank you for the review, Junglelover. :) Many cats in the Warriors series prefer the scent of their own Clan. This is why Eaglefeather hates the scent of the other ...

Thank you for the review, Junglelover. :) I try to stick as much to the original words as I can, yet keep my own storyline going. I've been trying to ...

Thanks, Allessandre. :) (Side note: Wow, another fan?) Sorry for the short post. It's close to my bedtime, and I'm tired. :lol:

Thank you for your advice, everyone. I've seen a lot of excellent points (most of them being that I'm relying too much on other fiction). From the looks of it, ...

Thank you for the compliments, Chup. :) Nice to know I have a fan! :lol: Anyway, Chapter Two will probably be up later today. It'll dip deeper, so to speak, ...

:lol: I'll make sure to look into it. Badgers are pretty interesting, really. By the way, is a baby badger called a cub, or a kit? :? I'll have to ...

Thanks for the review, Spoink. :D Yes, Warriors is a series about cats. Foxes are generally shy creatures, yes, but I didn't want to use a badger for this part ...