Bugwhisker

Hello, there. :D First off, I'd like to say that I'm not the best at reviews. Hope you can understand what I write... To start, I did like that you ...

Nice chapter, Allessadre! One thing I noticed, though, was that grammar was an issue... it's easy to fix! Example: “Angelfur, these two kits where found in our territory, until we ...

I've read the prologue before this. I have to say that this first chapter is better than the prologue. :) One thing I noticed is that you have a lot ...

Well, Lee-Anna, there was (spoiler) a cat named Jingo, but no Jango. Hello. :) I'll go along with everyone else here. You do need to capitalize your I's, and 'mt' ...

I've always enjoyed stories about wolves. :) They're one of my favorite animals, I tell you. One thing I noticed, though: "I think I broke my collar bone but no ...

Very good so far. :) It vaguely reminds me of the Guardians of Ga'Hoole series. I would give you some things to fix, but... I believe everything's already been covered... ...