Bugslake

This is an interesting concept. There are some grammatical errors, and the way you described certain things was hard for a reader like me to fully understand. Honestly though, I ...

I agree with @cleverclogs, this is a beautiful piece with a great story. It is almost wishful how it is written. I don't understand how you think this isn't good. ...

This is very muddled. When a different person speaks they need to have their own paragraph. I know that doing that is a lot of more work, but in the ...

I really like this story, you know what I had an idea like this but I couldn't get it to paper right. You have definitely done a really good job ...

Well, this was definitely really good and I want to read more. I so want to read what had happened to JD's mate and why she killed him. This was ...

Well, this is an interesting chapter. I guess it's just that I never knew how someone would feel if no one in their life really wanted them to be around. ...

I have to say that the main thing that I noticed was that each sentence began with I. Don't gets wrong, I do this a lot as well, but it ...

Off you kept going with this it would make an interesting story. The way their relationship is described makes me want to understand their backstory more. I want to know ...

Well, I've finally decided to review one of your works. You're slightly lucky because I don't like reviewing poems on a regular bases unless I understand them. So today I ...

I really loved this essay. It is something that everyone should know in this moral changing world. Many don't understand the consequences of their actions when it comes to this. ...

Found the Providers name, it's Zarr. I'm actually really happy with this chapter even though you may not be. It covered everything that had been left hanging from the last ...

I read this before now, I was just to lazy to write a review. Again amazing work, I especially loved when she explained why she was okay. I'm not to ...

Sorry my comment was supposed to be a review so here it goes the second time. Hopefully this will be enough words to be considered a review. Again amazing talent ...

I've tried writing something like this several times, but I end up failing miserably because I make everything progress to fast. You, you were able to create this story and ...

This is really interesting. There are a couple of mistakes where words are spelled incorrectly and some words should be replaced by others. The flow is really good and we ...