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Re: Ice Blue Chapter one! (it'll make sense later)
I didn't particularly like this chapter anyway; the story doesn't even get good at all until chapter.... four, I think. Which is very sad because I spent so much time ...
Nov 21, 2007 -
Re: The Epicenter 2/2
very good, once again, and better than the first.... you slowed down the pace just a bit and it really helped. Keep up the good work!!! (And once again... SLOW ...
Nov 21, 2007 -
Re: Ice Blue Chapter one! (it'll make sense later)
:) gracias
Nov 21, 2007 -
Re: I'm a What?-Bender
Very good, but you need to move a little SLOWER. It hurts my brain to follow. Great plot line (though always a little dark with you!!) and pretty good detail... ...
Nov 21, 2007 -
Re: Ice Blue Chapter one! (it'll make sense later)
I'll post the prologue soon. I forgot to do that first!!! It took me forever to do this chapter and then when I was done I went through and deleted ...
Nov 21, 2007