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  • Poetry » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Rachel Rose

    What a beautiful poem! I can tell you worked really hard on it. You did an amazing job. Everything flowed perfectly.

    Oct 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other Re: The thing unseen

    I love you poem! It almost gave me the chills reading it. I liked how you continued to use ....the thing unseen. Your poem flowed a few flaws not perfect. ...

    Oct 22, 2013


In a hole in the ground there lived a hobbit. Not a nasty, dirty, wet hole, filled with the ends of worms and an oozy smell, nor yet a dry, bare, sandy hole with nothing in it to sit down on or to eat: it was a hobbit-hole, and that means comfort.
— JRR Tolkien