BrumalHunter

That will be lampshaded in the next chapter. Comments: 1. I am generally capable of showing mercy. ;) 2. I am delighted you enjoy reading them, since they are a ...

Comments: 1. I'm surprised it drives you crazy, since that's actually standard in writing. A paragraph's worth of dialogue that spans half a page or more is a monstrosity at ...

Well, there is the incense Mr Kana used in his lesson, but that is expensive. Comments: 1. Ooh, I created an appropriate atmosphere by employing words in a manner that ...

Whoo! I have had free time for about a month now, yet I'm still not up to date... *the shame* Comments: 1. Thanks. I tried to portray them as teenagers. ...

Yay! Comments: 1. Those were actually Darren's thoughts, of which you said you wanted more. Bleargh, finding the balance is needlessly difficult... 2. Your reviews are nevertheless useful to me, ...

No worries. Comments: 1. Seamus and Nicole didn't battle. Seamus was over on the other side with Tyler, Aiden, and Malcolm. 2. The map is my solution to all of ...

*gasp* You are! Comments: 1. "Unfortunately, there was still time left after that, so Mr Van der Brunnen had them work out the scenarios he had placed on their desks ...

Comments: 1. My humour generally manifests as the dry variety, i.e. puns or lame jokes. :P 2. I shall try. Now that I'm creating a map of Dalton Village, it ...

Of course he's weird - otherwise he'd just be another teacher. ;) Comments: 1. I have since applied your advice to my numbers. It is quite useful. Impressions: 1. I ...

Darn, I forgot that diacritics cause the response to disappear. Drat. Comments: 1. Thanks! I knew creating visual aids would be worth it. 2. Sure. 3. Oh, that makes sense. ...

Yes, I am quite proud of those Move Tiers. If anyone claims I don't put in as much effort into this novel as I would in a world created entirely ...

I was in the exact same boat, which is why this response is only made now. (Happy New Year!) Comments: 1. Usually, I don't struggle with it, so this must ...

Salutations, Buggie! I promise I shall catch up during the coming week - for you, Tort, and Ender. Comments 1. "One of the paragraphs had three adverbs in three sentences, ...

Salutations, and my apologies for the lateness of these responses. Details: 1. If it feels rushed, then I am sad to say it probably is... 2. If I hope to ...

What, even my responses are overdue? This laziness will not be tolerated during 2016. General: 1. Don't I know it... Details: 1. I shall keep that in mind in future. ...