BrumalHunter

Thank you, I really appreciate your advice! :D

@Blackwood, as @Savvy says above, it's the Big Bad Wolf.

I am happy to have helped you, and everything I wrote in this review is the truth. I just hope others feel the same way. If not, they should read ...

Why thank you! And congratulations on correctly identifying the second language.

Nay. I shall now reveal the language to you. It is: ... (check your inbox)

Nope - one guess left. :)

Aww, thank you! *wipes away a tear*

Thank you to everyone who has replied so far; you have been an immense help! I now present to you The Blood Bath , version 1.2! Enjoy, and once again, ...

Thank you for your advice; I shall take it to heart.

Das ist nicht deutsch, der ist sicher ;) Anyway, you have to guess first! It is Germanic, though. :D

Actually, we both did. The correct spelling is "Shepherd".

Thank you for your input, my friend, I really do appreciate it! I shall be sure to consider the matters you have pointed out to me and improve on them ...

To all who read this, take note: This is NOT my final draft, which means it can still undergo changes. I shall post another comment when I am ready to ...

I am happy to have been of service! :D

Sorry for intruding, but isn't the traditional spelling "grammar"?