BrumalHunter

Fiery Salutations Well, your story may be under maintenance, but it is also in the Green Room. We now have a problem: How does one review a chapter when there ...

Salutations. I must say, this is a very depressing text. That does not mean it is not good, however, for the contrary is true. Characterisation obviously plays a crucial role, ...

Salutations. Per request, I have arrived to review your first chapter, and I must say, what a chapter! It has much potential; you need only hone your skills more, and ...

Salutations. This is excellent for a first chapter and exactly for what I'd look in one. The tempo with which your plot progresses is neither too fast nor too slow, ...

Salutations. Many people have a problem with prologues, as they feel it is often included unnecessarily. Adding a prologue to one's novel/novella must therefore be essential to the plot. This ...

Salutations This short story is really well-written. I enjoyed your imagery, and though all but the narrator were flat characters, that is to be expected in short story. In fact, ...

Salutations. Even for a short story, this is rather short, but in a short story, everything has a purpose, and so too does the length. If this short story's especially ...

Salutations. I am not very pleased. I eagerly await the arrival of your next chapters, and when I look again, five more have been released, and all of them already ...

Once again, I greet you. I have come to expect excellent writing from you, and once again, I am not disappointed. Your characters are as entertaining and amusing as always, ...

Salutations. I realise that reviewing a chapter this far into a novel may not be the best of ideas, but a truly great author will impress a reader who finds ...

Salutations. I see another wolf has already reviewed this work, and one of my fellow canine musketeers with whom I share a friendly competition, no less. Well, I have seen ...

Greetings. Really? You are working on two novels simultaneously? I suppose you work on the one when you are bored with the other? I am not complaining at all though, ...

Salutations. (again...) This chapter is more satisfying than the previous one, not because of decrease in quality, but simply since it contains a little more action. That Viper is also ...

Guter Tag. (Same as earlier :D ) This chapter is much shorter than the previous one. *frowns* Oh well, more analysing, then. I appreciate how you leave what happened after ...

Salutations. Before I actually review this, I advise that you change the "General" description of your genre to "Fanfiction", as that is undoubtedly a genre under which this novel falls. ...