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Re: whisper (my first shot at imaginitve writing) CH1
It’s amazing how a tall oak tree can be such a friend in the summer, shading you with it’s branches and endless leaves. It is also amazing how the very ...
Aug 6, 2010 -
Re: I'm Trying
This IS really really great! Keep up the good work! You say you trust me. That's a horrible lie. Inside, do you believe I'm untrustable? Is that why I have ...
Aug 6, 2010 -
Re: My First Ever Poem (from when I was seven!)
That is so amazing for a seven year old. :] If that's how you wrote then, I definitely need to check out what you're writing now!
Aug 6, 2010 -
Re: Why Do We Hate Pit Bulls?
This is a speech/essay I wrote for my English class last year. ---------------------------------------------- Why do we hate pit bulls? What do you look for in a dog? Color? Size? Behavior? ...
Jul 5, 2010 -
Re: Gingerbread [Edited]
This was a really great story. I really liked it, I enjoy fairy-tales a lot :) One of the things you could improve on is putting the story in past ...
May 11, 2010 -
Re: Summer Photography - 1
Hey! So, one thing I wanted to say was WOW, you take very amazing pictures for a camera phone. My favorite is the fourth one. It has very good quality ...
May 11, 2010 -
Re: Frog Legs
When I was eight, or I could have possibly been nine, my dad went out to eat with my grandpa and left me home alone. I was furious with him. ...
May 11, 2010 -
Re: True love is wealth
I thought this was really good. I really liked the message you were sending. Am a man of little means They say because am of little means, true love will ...
May 11, 2010 -
Re: Schizophrenia (edited)
This is a goregous passage. I have a huge fasination with Shizophrenia. I only really have one thing that everyone else hasn't said. Nothing can hear you except for the ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: Do You YWS?
I Pat Buchannan every day. Sometime's twice a day.
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: Bethany
The first paragraph of a story. It's based off my time in group therapy for excessive drug use. I don't know weather to continue it or not. I don't think ...
Mar 10, 2009
