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BrokenQuill

  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Broken.

    They say I’m broken. I say I’m free. They tell me I’m in a room. Say that I’m surrounded by four blank walls, with a perpetually locked window and a ...

    Jul 18, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Thy Will Be Done

    Odd that your last piece of writing found itself brutalized; this was actually very well done. Either you really, really, really improved, or your last reviewers were just insecure little ...

    May 28, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Thy Will Be Done

    I'm gonna be honest, I'm somewhat apprehensive about posting this. I've only put my fiction writing skills up to serious views once before, and it didn't go over so well. ...

    May 27, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Rosie.

    All in all, this was a pretty good story. You do well at describing people, both physically and emotionally, with a few words. Be careful though, since that's somewhat of ...

    May 27, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Delusion of Persecution

    Seems to be a debate going on. Haven't read it yet though, since I try not to read other reviews until I've made my own, so forgive me if I ...

    May 27, 2009


Poetry is thoughts that breathe, and words that burn.
— Thomas Gray