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Re: Broken.
They say I’m broken. I say I’m free. They tell me I’m in a room. Say that I’m surrounded by four blank walls, with a perpetually locked window and a ...
Jul 18, 2009 -
Re: Thy Will Be Done
Odd that your last piece of writing found itself brutalized; this was actually very well done. Either you really, really, really improved, or your last reviewers were just insecure little ...
May 28, 2009 -
Re: Thy Will Be Done
I'm gonna be honest, I'm somewhat apprehensive about posting this. I've only put my fiction writing skills up to serious views once before, and it didn't go over so well. ...
May 27, 2009 -
Re: Rosie.
All in all, this was a pretty good story. You do well at describing people, both physically and emotionally, with a few words. Be careful though, since that's somewhat of ...
May 27, 2009 -
Re: Delusion of Persecution
Seems to be a debate going on. Haven't read it yet though, since I try not to read other reviews until I've made my own, so forgive me if I ...
May 27, 2009
