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BrokenAngel

  • Other Poetry Re: Where Am I To Begin?

    Hey, I like it a lot, yes I do not like Twlight but i'm not going to bash the poem because of that. I think it's all good wording and ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Symptoms of Bullies' Croup

    Hey, I don't really see a point in this poem but that's just me. But i think you have very good wording and its set up in a good way. ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I still want you

    Gg127 thanks I will.

    Dec 13, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Anger Brings Blood

    Hey, I love this poem so much. You have good choice in words!

    Dec 12, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Razors Covered In Filth

    Hey, I think it's good and all but your telling I think you shouls tell more and less telling.

    Dec 12, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Love Scars

    Hey, I loved it! It sounds so real and in the first stanza it painted a picture for me! i loved it keep writing :)

    Dec 12, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: This Love Kills Me

    Hey I figured since you reviewed my first poem I wanted to review your's, I think it's really good and all but i think you should make it more clear ...

    Dec 12, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Shatter me, Break me

    Hia I am very familar with the way you feel, i have pretty much the same emotions toward this one guy. But anyways, I like it is worded very nice ...

    Dec 12, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I still want you

    Thanks guys for your reviews. I know I had made a lot of spelling errors and I will change that, I had to leave for school. But I'm glad for ...

    Dec 12, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I still want you

    You've caused me so much pain and misery But I still cannot let you go, I don't know why you mean so much to me? You see, To other people ...

    Dec 12, 2011


If I seem to wander, if I seem to stray, remember that true stories seldom take the straightest way.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind