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Wow. I agree with who ever it was that said you should go into musical theater. If you could put a bunch of songs together and write a plot. Then ...

It was very good. I like the main character. I could really connect with her. I too am the girl who never gets the guy. Always the loser in a ...

That's good. I want to know why she is so close to Justice. And why is she living with his family? We found out that her mother died and that ...

I like it. I'd like to see a little bit more of Natalia though. We hear from her in the beginning and then the rest is Adam. I want to ...

Well, I like it as a beginning. True this is a prologue but, i still think that we need a little more. We don't know her name and we have ...

Over all it seems like it' really good. I want to see more of who Sarah is though. We don't really get a sense of what she likes, her morals, ...

Well, I think it's sweet. But, I'd like to see what happens when Emmett wakes up and when they first meet. Emmett and Rosalie are a hard couple to talk ...