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  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Lost and Found

    Nice, it was full of emotion. I want to know more though. The little splotches of story didn't have a lot of detail. I want to know why the boy ...

    Apr 30, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: Coffee Break (a Poker Face by Lady Gaga parody)

    That is probably the funniest thing I have seen in a while. I'm practically addicted to coffee so this is like my theme song :D

    Apr 24, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: Stay

    On the outside I'm angry, On the outside I'm mean, On the outside I'm pretending you never meant a thing to me, On the outside it's easy to put on ...

    Apr 21, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: See Me

    Wow. I agree with who ever it was that said you should go into musical theater. If you could put a bunch of songs together and write a plot. Then ...

    Apr 21, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Spy Team K. (chapter 1)

    Chapter 1 Lensburg Okay pretend you’re in space, yes you’ll need a helmet. Now pretend you have the vision of a state of the art satellite that was placed into ...

    Sep 12, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Sour Girl

    It was very good. I like the main character. I could really connect with her. I too am the girl who never gets the guy. Always the loser in a ...

    Sep 12, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Fairies(part 1)

    That's good. I want to know why she is so close to Justice. And why is she living with his family? We found out that her mother died and that ...

    May 3, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Headwind - CH 1

    I like it. I'd like to see a little bit more of Natalia though. We hear from her in the beginning and then the rest is Adam. I want to ...

    Apr 17, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Princess On The Doorsteps -Prolouge-

    Well, I like it as a beginning. True this is a prologue but, i still think that we need a little more. We don't know her name and we have ...

    Apr 17, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Majics

    Eric looked out of his bed room window down at the wet streets of Manhattan below him. It had been raining for two days straight. Eric was going to kill ...

    Mar 24, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Boys Vs. Girls Part II

    Amy and her sister had just gotten into Caroline’s new room when she couldn’t hold it in any more. “Well that was the worst Welcome-to-the-Neighborhood-Gift I’ve ever received,” she said ...

    Mar 24, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Purple Magic (old)

    Over all it seems like it' really good. I want to see more of who Sarah is though. We don't really get a sense of what she likes, her morals, ...

    Mar 24, 2009
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Three Kisses...xxx (shortened version for a competition)

    I liked it. I think it's probably what men like him were thinking.

    Mar 24, 2009
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Love at First Sight

    Well, I think it's sweet. But, I'd like to see what happens when Emmett wakes up and when they first meet. Emmett and Rosalie are a hard couple to talk ...

    Mar 24, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Boys vs Girls

    Boys vs. Girls The War Begins Sean Gordon sat in his tree house with his two brothers Connor and Max. The boys were watching the moving van pull up to ...

    Mar 24, 2009


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