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Re: A friend( will she see me?)
This wasn't the greatest poem but it wasn't awful All I'm asking is for you to make it romantic if you want it to be romantic and correct your punctuation ...
Dec 26, 2007 -
Re: Someone
After all the trouble we went through to get the Christmas Tree, it is finally here I put ornaments on one by one hoping that I will feel an emotion, ...
Dec 26, 2007 -
Re: My Painful Death
I look down at my shaking hands pale and covered in blood I slide up along the bathroom stall when i look outside the door to the mirror my face ...
Dec 26, 2007 -
Re: Person dieing....
hi meg!!! its emily awesome poem, great descriptive writing maybe try reading over after you write it for spelling errors(makes it easier to read) Hope to see more work soon ...
Dec 26, 2007