BroadwayGirl

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This was a generally well written song, I myself have written a song or to but still yet need to post them. As I was reading this there were a ...

This poem unfortunately sounds like it came right out of a Hallmark card. When I read this poem it doesn't sound like you took this poem seriously. If you want ...

Quote : DO NOT ENTER I warn you, beware You’re entering the room of a teenage girl Her private domain, her forbidden lair Something in this first part draws you ...

Chapter One. Blood. Sweat. Tears. Pain. It all falls down when we let that ball hit the floor. It only has to bounce once. And then its over. My teammates ...

That was a very well writen poem. [quote] She recalls how she used to fly Soaring up through clouds so high. That (for example) could have been more descriptive For ...

That was VERY good. I can certainly relate to that exact same feeling. One thing that I found confusing was the little intro/beggining part. I think either the punctuation was ...

As I sit all alone starring into pure nothingness, the bitter sweet sting of tears burning my inmobile eye, I think of him. The man who made me feel the ...

sorry i was having trouble with my computer so i posted the same comment four times. SORRY!!!!!! -BroadwayGirl

This was generally a good poem First you could start by describing the actions in more detail as at the end i was left kind of confused: did she leave, ...

This was generally a good poem First you could start by describing the actions in more detail as at the end i was left kind of confused: did she leave, ...

This was generally a good poem First you could start by describing the actions in more detail as at the end i was left kind of confused: did she leave, ...

This was generally a good poem First you could start by describing the actions in more detail as at the end i was left kind of confused: did she leave, ...

there are soooooo many words I could use to describe this poem....... complex, intriging and in a way romantic!!! I hate that I can't give you any constructive critisism because, ...

hey KimberlyKat awesome writing I'm sorry I don't have any constructive critisism for you!!!! It was that great!!! Keep up the writing...PLEASE. -BroadwayGirl