BroadwayGirl

That generator is AWESOME!! I chose poem generator. They come up with the coolest and wackiest poems!! I love it so much. The theme generator gives me a laugh for ...

I understand where you are coming from Riedawriter23. It's just our curiosity getting the best of us. Really, there is no topic to debate. We are all different and our ...

Okay Phebe, my review might not be helpful but we'll see. Instead of Quoting a bunch of things I think I'll just tell you what is wrong and then when ...

Alright Phebe this was an improvement but there is always room to even better improve it. Quote: Your blood is my drink; Your eyes are my future; Your body is ...

Thank you everyone for all the amazing and helpful crtics. My second chapter will be posted by Friday the 15th of February. Once again thank you for all the helpful ...

Alright Alex this was definitely an improvement from your last post. But something that concerns me is that you have not been keeping your 2:1 ratio. Since you have now ...

Grammar, spelling, punctuation, these are all VERY important things in any writing or else it becomes ineligible. So, I shall show you some areas that need improvement. Phebe I need ...

Two of my friends started using it and when I got my own computer for Christmas I checked it out and realized how amazing it is!!!!!! -BroadwayGirl:)

I love to write in the first person. I always write from the character's perspective. I personally find it more interesting. -BroadwayGirl:)

Quote: "Welcome to Eden", said the sign on the road. I think the words Welcome to Eden should be in italics rather than quotation. Quote: Firstly, because the original plan ...

This poem was a tad bit confusing but still good, just a few suggestions for improvement. Quote: "You're old and boring, you don't understand me!" I've been there too; I ...

I think it's inate. Why would you try to fix who they are, there is nothing wrong with homosexuality. One of my friends is bi-sexual and it doesn't change how ...

Hey Phebe I know that this isn't a helpful critic because you already know that I love it as you already showed it to me to at school, so I ...

THANK YOU for all the critics, I have edited it multiple times now but this is the last draft(I hope) Let me know if I'm ready to move on. -BroadwayGirl

Hey Phebe it's Emily!!! This critic may seem bad but it is meant to help you(plus you can critic my stuff later if you feel the need to critic something) ...