BrittanyBooks

Hello! I love the story line you have!! Now for some editing... I could hear twigs snapping from behind me as I ran. You already mentioned in your opening sentence ...

Hello!!! I absolutely love the way you write! I could see your book getting published in an instant! However I was a little confused at some points. Is the main ...

Hello!!! I love this opening! It is very interesting and has a few cliff hangers! Now for the criticism... How exactly did she run into a wall? Was she not ...

Whoa!!!! slow down there ;) This novel has a lot of potential and i love the plot, but too much happened at once! Before you get into what shes dealing ...

The night that Dad died changed Luna’s entire life. It started out being a fun evening with her family. Luna’s mom wanted to have a bonfire in their backyard. They ...