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In the kingdom of Andron there was a evil and twisted king ruling over the land. His name was King Minyios, and how he came to power was quite simple ...

I find this story very interesting. I like the use of bright language, you really painted a picture with your words. But you repeated the word "sword" too much, you ...

This was great!!! I enjoyed it.

This has happened to me plenty of times. Books: Hoot Inkheart Percy Jackson and the Lightning Thief Harry Potter Narnia Great books make great movies.(but the books are better though ...

This is a good story with a good plot, but i see a few problems. 1) The story is good but you need to be more specific. you jumped right ...

Thank you, good characters are so hard to make these days.

RSVP you will see me! see how i made that rhyme :lol:

dont get made at him/her critism is a good thing. ok

thanks for the critisim. I'm not mad critisim is exactly what a good writer needs so just keep it up.

Have you ever been to a library where not the library but a single book made this library enchanted. Well that's what happened to Ben. Ben was 15 teen years ...